What would you do with this design? - HTML Forums

PaulK · 05-25-2009, 07:25 PM

Hi all,

I'm designing a new business card as part of a re-brand...and I think I've been staring at it for too long now and I can't tell what looks good and what doesn't haha.

The card will have a grungy side and a clean side...guess which side it is!

I'm just looking for a general critique or any advice...I've officially become useless to my own company haha

Oh and the colours are dull because it's in CMYK for printing...

Thanks in advance

~Paul

Jenie0109 · 06-17-2009, 02:08 AM

great looking business card. but the thing is., its kinda hard to read the text.
i dunno.,maybe if you can work out on it like create a white background just behind the text...

whats the point of having a great business card if you cant read it....

its a good design actually..

Jlbraaten · 06-24-2009, 09:13 AM

I have to agree that it is slightly difficult to read the text. The average user will give you about 5 seconds before the give up and go elsewhere. Make sure you take this into consideration when choosing content for a website.

Cheers!

@jlbraaten
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