trying to 'commercial page?'

[Gauranga]

How is this for my 1st go?:D


http://www.gitamrta.org/ebooks/gita.htm

Of course I used a prog to do it.

[feonten]

I'm sorry but I can't read it because of the background image.

[Gauranga]

I changed it.

Does it look professional?

[Roge]

* The scrolling text looks very poor with the graphics in the background

* 'catergories' = 'categories'

* Under the blue header with 'Bhaktivedanta Book Trust Inc (BBTi)' you do not need the other blue headers. You should remove them.

* A full spell check is necessary there are a ton of spelling/grammar errors in your text

* Can't read the text under the image - clicking the image should bring up an enlarged version so that the text can be read

[Gauranga]

I changed it a little, must admit I'm having trouble getting it right. :crying:

Thx for the tip above:burnt:

[Gauranga]

sorry guys, it;s changed to how I like it. I tried to do a corporate site. But I couldn't be asked. hehe. seeya

[00_heaven]

im sorry but i really dont like it
- the background image is too big and causes loading time to be slow
- when the site has fully loaded there is some screetching sound which hurts my ears
- when you hover over the top headder the picture goes all blury, i dont think the effect works
- the site would look a bit better if it was centered
- where is says download 1 | download 2 |download 3 i have no idea what im downloading
- im not to found of the greenish border

[ukkiller]

i agree the background is distracting, i suggest perhaps fading it a little so the text stands out and is readable. Also the hover over image is a little blurry, nice idea though but its a little distracting.


Jason :)