please reveiw my site..thanx

[maddyy]

k i got 2 sites.........

this is the main business site i got........
http://www.next-generation-mobiles.co.uk/

will be populated top left and right by ads. mainly just the logo and site name ......

and this one is

http://www.next-generation-mobiles.co.uk/elimmain.html

is a home page for my local church web site. this is all my work and have never done web sites before......
the both are still early sites and get changed every night nearly.......
any advise would be appreciated

[Grump]

It looks like both sites were built by 2 different people. Maybe the church site was done by a website creation program, but it is also missing quite a bit of standard markup and isn't even using inline styles effectively. And the buttons don't do what they are s'posed to, I think.

But for a first-timer, you should be proud that you have gotten this far. I am a rank n00b myself and I had a lot of bad starts. If you enjoy doing it, you will no doubt get a lot better at it.

R'gards,

Grump