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[hobbnobbin]

Please critique my web site

[cloud9]

Originally posted by hobbnobbin
Please critique my web site

... the address is http://www.geocities.com/hobbnobbin_1/

[cloud9]

Your site is a bit too dis-orderly for my liking. I can't see the real point of it and it seems like a lot of unrelated pictures just put together. Also, the email addresses on offer are hard to spell:


Man: Great, so I'll mail you, what's your address?
OtherMan: josh6765@hobbnobbin.zzn.com
Man: how do you spell that exactly?

that is much harder than josh6765@msn.com or similar.

I also don't like your no right click script, as one image was broken and I wanted to try and re-load it. Anyway, these scripts are useless anyway. The layout is unclear.

Perhaps you would do better using a web template, from www.freewebtemplates.com . I want to say this site has potential, and it could have, but I can't. - no good content.

[Dave Swift]

1) Take away about have of the graphics and elements from your page.

2) Get a free template, like cloud9 said.

3) Get rid of the cursor trail script and the no right click script - if I wanted to steal your images I could very easily do it without right -clicking. The no right click script just irritates visitors.

[kevin]

like a multi-flavored snowcone, your website can't decide what flavor it really wants to be.

Lots of energy but no focus. It looks like you had fun puting it together :)

Regards,
Kevin