www.blazerfriday.tk

[CBrown]

www.blazerfriday.tk

[Trick Silo]

CBrown:

Your site is set up in a manner that will allow the user to easily venture through your different sections. The way that it looks now is fine, but it appears very dark and gloomy to me. If that is the effect you were looking for, then you did a great job, but maybe a picture or a slightly more involved banner would help.

I did not go through every section, but below in quotations is what you stated, and below that is how I believe you should alter it to be more grammatically correct. This is under the 'about' section. Furthermore, I have placed my revision in bold.

"The 'History' page contains the story of the original Blazer Friday, and finally the 'Pictures' page contains pictures from Blazer Fridays that have been sent in from all of our loyal blazer wearers."

The 'History' page contains the story of the original Blazer Friday. Finally, the 'Pictures' page contains pictures from Blazer Fridays that have been sent in from all of our loyal blazer wearers.

Sincerely,

Trick Silo

[CBrown]

thanks trick.

I've never been one with words, and I'll get to fixing that as soon as I can.

thanks for the advice about the banner. I'll look into that also.

[Trick Silo]

CBrown,

No problem, and one more thing, I just wanted to say that I really like the device on your signature! I find that really neat!

Sincerely,

Trick Silo