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discented
03-19-2004, 09:19 AM
another change to the layout, I think this one is much cleaner then the previous.

www.discented.com

Joe
03-19-2004, 12:19 PM
first impression is good, but your site is looking somewhat plain, i think it would look good with an image inside the box on the left side

definatly not fond of the text, remove the underline and make it a normal font size (not bold)

the navigation and layout looks great, the content is good but minimal at the moment

overall, very nice work :D

agent002
03-19-2004, 12:24 PM
I think I have said this before, but isn't the word spelt descented...?

kevin
03-19-2004, 01:59 PM
Originally posted by joe2kiss
first impression is good, but your site is looking somewhat plain, i think it would look good with an image inside the box on the left side

definatly not fond of the text, remove the underline and make it a normal font size (not bold)

the navigation and layout looks great, the content is good but minimal at the moment

overall, very nice work :D

I though I was reading one of my reviews, they generally start out:

first impression is.....

and end with:

overall.....

I like your style! :D

kevin
03-19-2004, 02:12 PM
Its really not doing much for me, color palette is too dark for my taste, design is boxy and flat looking. Errors in the HTML code, which for a person advertising webdesign is a no-no. Bad use of CSS, almost all inline styles instead of using a style sheet. I don't think you're ready for prime time yet. Get some more skills then hang your shingle.

Have you looked at the site in Mozilla or other browsers besides IE? All your little code errors will be more obvious if you do. I see this coding error all over the website:

<p style="border-bottom: 1px dashed black; background-color="4791C5;width: 10%;>

note the last quote is in the wrong place breaking the tag and causing the pages to look funny, like all text underlined on homepage, some text smaller than other text when it shouldn't be, different font faces, etc.

Run it through an HTML validator.

Joe
03-19-2004, 02:40 PM
Originally posted by kevin
I though I was reading one of my reviews, they generally start out:

first impression is.....

and end with:

overall.....

I like your style! :D LOL :D

maybe ive been reading too many of your reviews :P