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Michael
11-29-2003, 03:25 PM
hi
i haven't asked for a review for nearly a year
so here is my latest home page design for my Pokemon site
http://www.s4u.org/ps/Temp
tell me what you think
thanks!:D

Josh
11-29-2003, 03:48 PM
Looks pretty good. I really don't like the cursor when you move your mouse over a link.

Make sure to add the doctype and meta tags.

Joe
11-29-2003, 04:54 PM
really dont like that cursor :P lol

i dont think you should have your fastcounter there, it looks almost out of place there.

click here for html errors (http://validator.w3.org/check?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fs4u.org%2Fps%2FTemp%2F&doctype=HTML+4.01+Transitional&charset=utf-8+%28Unicode%2C+worldwide%29&ss=1)
CSS errors (http://jigsaw.w3.org/css-validator/validator?uri=http%3A%2F%2Fs4u.org%2Fps%2FTemp%2F&warning=1&profile=css2&usermedium=all)

other than that, nice layout / colours / design

Joe ;)

Collado008
11-29-2003, 05:59 PM
looks pretty good i agree about the fast counter looking out of place though. pretty nice color scheme though, those colors really work well together.

qqqq
11-29-2003, 06:47 PM
beautiful! but why is their a space on the right hand side? you need to expand it over the whole page or centre it.

i viewed using ie6, res 1024*768

rush989
11-30-2003, 01:58 AM
pretty good man, the only thing i would suggest is smooth out those white edges around the boxes in the center.

maybe something like this?

http://www.campingnation.com/top-right.gif

DA Master
11-30-2003, 03:35 AM
That cursor is really annoying, hate that part. The rest looks ok, also one point will you have to scroll on an 800x600 screen resolution? If so then make it so because loads of people still use 800x600.

Michael
11-30-2003, 03:35 PM
hi all
thank you for your suggestions and reviews
I think I will remove the cursor effect, and replace the fastcounter with text counter
I purposely make the table width=780 so I believe you shouldn't have to scroll in 800*600
yeah and for the boxes, my original intend is to make a part of them transparent, but for some reason some white edges appear, I will fix that as well
any more review???:D

DA Master
12-01-2003, 03:20 AM
Just that I have a 17" screen with high resolution, so I was just checking.

cabdriver
12-04-2003, 05:33 PM
just one thing..... i feel that the rounded corners should be cleaned up a bit. the white stroke looks like it wasn't done properly or it catches too much attention.