Newbie Site! NEEEDDDSSSSS review

[Rahkshijeff]

www.geocities.com/iamjeffchang

[mikeyp]

the popups that come up are very annoying. i like the greens that your site has except that your text color is too light for the background. try getting a darker green for it.

[iamlynnchang]

Jeff, the pictures still don't show up here and even if it did, your backround blends too much with the pictures. I like your games even though I know you didn't design it. I am not doing this for junk mail. How many parts are there in the Knights website anyway?

Your sister

[iamlynnchang]

I don't think it NNNNNEEEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDDDDSSSSSSSSSS review, I think it needs review

[Buttery Joe]

It's too dynamic. I'm happy you know Javascript and everything, but... lay off a bit. No mouse following things or text popups. It's all gotta go.

[Badger]

:eek:

[tarundhillon]

Hey the mouse trail is pretty cool but you need to change
colors light backgroud color with dark text color is generally a good rule to follow. And your page is also throwing a lot of script error's . and please remove the alerts in the starting .. hope to see better site later
regards
Dhillon

[XilverFaerie]

Alright, I'm gonna be downright HONEST with you. I think the popups are EXTREMELY annoying, and the background colour really sets me off, ESPECIALLY with the text being green! You should use CSS to change the scrollbar and link colours. I also do not like the black thing at the bottom. It IS cool, but it just doesn't suit the site and plus it makes people scroll down for nothing. If you do want a green background, change it to a slightly lighter green, and make the font slightly darker, just to balance it off. Your images, as well, do not show up! EEK! I think I know why too. Linking to an image on your D drive will work for you, but when other people look at it, it does not work unless they have your files buried in exactly the same folders as you, because the browser looks at the image code, and goes through the harddrive to find those images!

The mouse trail is fun to play with, however the background isn't transparant, therefore it looks very akward.

The runscape clan page is... well, I don't think you want my opinion on that....

I will stop now, but I have one more thing to say.

If you want a shorter version of my opinion, fine.
My shorter opinion: remake your site.

[JaVaScRiPtGuRu]

Thanks!
Ill get rid of the popups!

[planetsim]

i hate geocities and the way they allow such crap on the net.. they make having a site too easy with the PageBuilder thing...

I probably shouldnt say much i did once use it.. but saw its evilness..

Sorry if this sounds like an insult.