Websites for Reviews

[atakamran]

hi all

i designed these website kindly review them .
www.verticity.com (http://www.verticity.com) (all pages) www.vebeye.com(all (http://www.vebeye.com(all) Clients and mainsite) www.digitali-it.com (http://www.digitali-it.com) www.highimpactweb.com/globalresource (http://www.highimpactweb.com/globalresource) http://pakwebconsultant.hypermart.net/portal

kindly go through them and send me ur suggestions

see ya

atakaman

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hi there .
Please feel free to contact me at atakamran@yahoo.com

[kevin]

All very nicely done. Excellent graphics. Layouts are visually interesting. Overall design is also very good.

Only real comment is...

Saw too many grammatical and spelling errors for what are otherwise very professional looking pages. Is English your first language? If not, have a native English speaker check the grammer and spelling for you or use a spell check program to help correct mistakes.

Regards,
Kevin

[atakamran]

hi

thanks for the reply i will treasure ur suggestions and will check my spellings

yes english is my second lanugage .

thanks again

atakamran :-)