please review my website....

[Absynthe]

hello, could you review my website? Comments both good and bad are welcome.

Thanks!!

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Absynthe

[Absynthe]

Oops... the address is http://www.geocities.com/absynthe66


sorry!

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Absynthe

[kevin]

Absynthe,

It is always harder for me to review personal websites. But I'll go ahead since you are asking for comments.

Layout is as simple as it gets on most pages, everything centered down the page. Some of the graphics are too big and all the flashing dividers are rather obnoxious. I would try and at least use a two column layout to make the appearance more interesting and compact and incorporate some sort of better navigational scheme.

Pretty good use of what are probably premade graphics to convey the theme of the web site but there are maybe too many of them.

I'm not going to comment about the content of your website too much. It's stuff that mostly does not interest me at all. I did find some of the poetry to be interesting. I liked the layout of Delusions. The poem was OK too. (I only read a little bit of poetry and have never studied it so I don't know much about it in a technical sense).

I would get rid of most of the gratuitous graphics and try and add some more content. The layout (as said previoulsy) could be improved upon.

Overall, it is what it is.... a few personal web pages hosted on a free server so they can post their banners, nothing more nothing less. I guess if I were interested in the subject matter I might find something to hold my interest. But honestly, I can't.

Regards,
Kevin

[Absynthe]

Thanks for your reply! I was thinking about working it into frames, just waiting for the time to do it :).

thanks again
Absynthe

[Steffen Schramm]

Hm.. I think the site is too chaotic. The cat eyes are not bad, but there are really to much animated separators, and if you scroll down you don´t find anything important, just banners and webrings.
And I think you shouln´t use two ( and even the same )counters on one page. Another problem is this pink text on black background. It´s very difficult to read, I think you should choose some other colors - but that´s my personal opinion.

[Absynthe]

I'm in the process of picking new seperators, just can't find any I like :)

and the two counters is a booboo....I don't know why there is two....I must have pasted twice. LOL

Thanx for replying!!