My Webpage

[sanzonee]

Come and chek out my website and tell me what you think about it... it's address is http://www.angelfire.com/pa4/sanzone

[Mellow]

Hi,
I think the look is very clean and appealing with the black background and the red text. The font you use is nice, too. But I'd like some more information on the index page. Whose site am I visiting and what is it about? It's good to let your visitors know right away what the site is about. Hope this helps. Good luck! :)

[wid101]

Great site alittle wierd but cool. I wanna read some of the stuff you wrote about later but I liked the intro.

[Mark]

I have to agree with Mellow's comments plus:

- your thumbnail images are broken on the photo page

[sin]

All your photo links are broken on you photo page, Nice theory's, a little dark, not appealing to most, but as you said your not out to be part of the crowd, keep it up, o ya your flash links are a little hard to hit, put a bigger hit square over them.

[Dr. Web]

you have not defined a 'hit state' on your buttons in flash. Thats why the surfer must mouseover a letter to get the link to work. I'd suggest to go back into flash and add this, as it makes it a lot easier to click on the buttons.

[kevin]

As far as the basic design and layout goes its OK. There really is not much design or layout but that is preferable to the alternative!

The flash stuff is good but like Doc said you need to define the hit state so not just the text is "hot".

I'm too old to find your content to be of interest. Give yourself a few decades and you will understand what I mean. Nothing personal, its just teenager stuff and that is way in my past.


Anyways, looks like you're having fun at school and have a good looking bunch of friends. Keep it that way as long as possible.

Regards,
kevin


PS:
"I love doing things that are wrong and risky. Almost anything that is against most people's morals, I'm all for."

Standing up and yelling in church is not a moral issue, it is a behavioral issue. Same with slamming a car in reverse at 70. If you think those are risky/wrong or immoral behaviors you are leading a very sheltered life my young friend. You wanna try risky? Break into a police officers home and steal his gun, while he is at home sleeping. That is both immoral and risky, you can kill two birds with one stone. Go to the "bad side of town" where the "minorities" live, find a large crowd and start yelling stuff like "white power" or "F-U N-word" or "wet backs go home!", that would be risky, wrong, and immoral according to most people. Or maybe you mean you like doing risky things if there is no real danger involved. In which case they are not really risky, but merely wrong and maybe immoral. You're not into child abuse are you? That is immoral. Or is kiddie porno your bag? Most would agree that is immoral. I know, you said "Almost anything that is against most people's morals, I'm all for." So you left yourself a small disclaimer there. Good for you.

[donovanm]

Just two points to make:

I'd like to see an option to skip the intro on the first page.

This has been said before, but the links are a little anoying as you have to line up your cursor exactly over one of the letters.

Matt

[AlCapone]

Wow, a pretty freaky site there. Mind you, by the sounds of your bio, that would be a compliment! lol.

Anyway, a nicely designed site with a catchy intro that loads quickly and draws you in. I think it would look be left justified rather than centralised, and none of the pictures loaded for me.

Other than that, plenty to fascinate those with a morbid curiosity.