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mescorp
09-11-2000, 03:32 AM
Well, I've made some changes since my last post for opinions and I would like to see what everyone thinks of them. My site has not been advertised at all as of yet, while I am working on bugs and what not! While I realize that it may not be considered 'professional' to put up pages that say "this page is under construction", and that I probably shouldn't be asking for opinions until the entire site is complete, it's important for me to get technical input as I go ~ so I hope I'm not being too much of a pain in anyone's rear! Please give me your honest....to the bone....opinions! I like to hear the good and the bad, so don't hold back, but use some tact!! LOL!!

http://www.yourcreativeconsulting.com


Thanx!

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~ Me Scorp ~

tippy
09-11-2000, 10:45 AM
On your first page...I would move the "we service clients nationwide" to the left...so it is balance with "why creative consulting".Put the graphic center or after "wide"

Top graphic(left) takes the eyes away from your page...Move it to the right, it will bring you into the page not away...

In Bussiness Newsletter, Your divider line breaks your paragraph...It is in the wrong place

I would remove the little pig(not classy enough for your page)in the "Bonus& Incentive"

Same with that animation line in "pre employment.."

You are on your way to a great page!

mescorp
09-11-2000, 10:52 AM
<BLOCKQUOTE><font size="1" face="Verdana, Arial">quote:</font><HR>Originally posted by tippy:
On your first page...I would move the "we service clients nationwide" to the left...so it is balance with "why creative consulting".Put the graphic center or after "wide"

Top graphic(left) takes the eyes away from your page...Move it to the right, it will bring you into the page not away...

In Bussiness Newsletter, Your divider line breaks your paragraph...It is in the wrong place

I would remove the little pig(not classy enough for your page)in the "Bonus& Incentive"

Same with that animation line in "pre employment.."

You are on your way to a great page!<HR></BLOCKQUOTE>

Thanx Tippy! Actually, I do agree about the pig! I'll have another look at the others you mentioned too!



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~ Me Scorp ~