Can you review my site please?

[Sheyac]

My site URL is: http://www.geocities.com/sheyac/

Can you please review my site and give it a percentage and tell me a good way to promote it if you think its good?

Thanks
Sherif

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[nice start]

Well, nice start...
some things you may want to look into:
1) in the humor page preload your image while the javascript is running it's course...

2)fix all of 'your' pics!

[wid101]

You need some work!
I suggest going and getting a template to get you started. http://www.freewebtemplates.com has some good ones. Oh yeah lose the music! It gets annoying. Yeah like he said preload the images.
check out my site
http://www.envy.nu/tabworld
Later...

[huythuy]

You should get rid of marquees , try to make one menu ( text/picture if you can ) .

I'm scare to click anything in your web coz I hate ads and scripts . Please reduce them .

As my point , honestly ==>yours = 20-30%

[kevin]

My first impression is this is your first webpage/site. Many beginner mistakes, too many dividers, overuse of the marquee tag, too many primary colors, background music, center alignment of all elements on the pages.

The alert window humor was funny until the third one. Two is enough, 5 or 6 is obnoxious.

Don't get discouraged, my first webpages looked very much like yours. With more experience and practice you will learn how to make pages that visitors will find interesting.

Regards,
Kevin

[OOZERO]

Basically backing up what has already been said.

Overuse of the <marquee> tag. One is too much never mind three or 4!

The alerts are annoying and obviously not true. :(

Everything is centered and looks very... frontpage express. Try aligning things to one side...

Way too many free gimmicks. Like the, its '195 days till my birthday' Do we care? Does it look good? On your main page?!

The james bond midi is annoying, has been heard way too many times before and i found my self muting the sound card...

The colored horizontal 'rainbow' bars are 'interesting' why not just use a thin dark grey seperator and reduse the amount of them as well.

The menu at the bottom, was fairly hard to find. You need an inital value in the pull down box that says something like 'click here for a menu' ...


A lot of first sites are like this but without much effort they can be improved into something really worth looking through.

[justjeni]

Hi,
I'm a little late in here - I crashed about 2 weeks ago and then a few days later I opened a corrupted file in my e-mail from someone trying to sabotage me. I'm telling you all this for a reason - that joke you play when one enters your site about made me poop my pants. Thought something happened again and didn't think it was funny at all...

Otherwise it looks nice, but I'm a novice although I think you've got some fun stuff on it for those looking to fool around and have some fun on the net.